tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2693278311831499317.post5073777720236173330..comments2023-12-15T20:38:35.316-08:00Comments on W.A.Rusho Author: How to do a review, and a review of the Schoharie County Sunshine FairW.A. Rushohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04313458212200821633noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2693278311831499317.post-90496140113932235872016-08-08T10:35:53.890-07:002016-08-08T10:35:53.890-07:00Usually I do include the costs, but including &quo...Usually I do include the costs, but including "how to" kind of limited me with space.<br />Also, it is not me to be able to start a conversation with others.W.A. Rushohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04313458212200821633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2693278311831499317.post-7764187471166504182016-08-06T21:10:35.081-07:002016-08-06T21:10:35.081-07:00A couple of suggestions:
(1) You may want to provi...A couple of suggestions:<br />(1) You may want to provide the reader with some specific cost information: Did the fair have an admission charge, and if so, what was it? How much were tickets for rides? What did you pay for that pulled pork sandwich?<br />(2) Depending on how sociable you are, you may want to strike up conversations with other attendees and ask them what THEY found impactful about the fair.A. Peakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10603056373768030580noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2693278311831499317.post-35092797514176903672016-08-06T06:32:00.931-07:002016-08-06T06:32:00.931-07:00Thanks for the great info on writing a review. I&#...Thanks for the great info on writing a review. I've never written one before so this is very informative. I always enjoy your reviews. I wish I didn't live so far away so I could get to one of these events. But at least I can live vicariously through your experiences. Ericahttp://www.ericamesirov.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2693278311831499317.post-75587884176632404512016-08-06T04:17:02.674-07:002016-08-06T04:17:02.674-07:00A very thoughtful approach to reviewing a fair. In...A very thoughtful approach to reviewing a fair. In your reviews what I always appreciate most is the little mini-profiles of some of the people who are part of the fair. It is what makes a fair unique and distinctive.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14291236742674605851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2693278311831499317.post-81242373983189516182016-08-06T01:18:46.382-07:002016-08-06T01:18:46.382-07:00You have broken this down in small bitesize chunks...You have broken this down in small bitesize chunks. It is important when writing an article, to capture details that people actually want to read and to "sell" the event to readers.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01638568837925608211noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2693278311831499317.post-28827269191010119432016-08-05T12:52:02.087-07:002016-08-05T12:52:02.087-07:00Fun post, William. I like how you combined the how...Fun post, William. I like how you combined the how to with the review. This coming Sunday's blog is about an upcoming festival in Pittsburgh--Little Italy Days. I may go back and add some things after reading this!RM Griffithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12839456272512737899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2693278311831499317.post-10339163952282309022016-08-05T01:32:45.166-07:002016-08-05T01:32:45.166-07:00Good points about how to write a review. Same goes...Good points about how to write a review. Same goes if you are writing an article for a newspaper or magazine about any event. Catarinanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2693278311831499317.post-59512003846833834722016-08-04T11:40:06.247-07:002016-08-04T11:40:06.247-07:00I love this. It's very helpful for reviewing f...I love this. It's very helpful for reviewing fairs and other events. Thanks for sharing.Sabrina Quairolihttp://www.sabrinasorganizing.com/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2693278311831499317.post-91089694796013669762016-08-04T06:18:08.527-07:002016-08-04T06:18:08.527-07:00The Schoharie County Sunshine Fair sounds like a w...The Schoharie County Sunshine Fair sounds like a wonderful community event, William. Anything with "sunshine" in the name catches my attention! Thx for sharing your review tips.Doreen Pendgracshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07034373301858091444noreply@blogger.com